What kind of partner do I want ?
- - Understand religion
- - Educated man
- - Humorist
Everyone must have a dream to get married, and
everyone also has criteria for each spouse, including me.
First, I want a partner
who understands about faith and religion, because I think a man should be able
to guide his family to jointly improve the relationship of self to God.
Second, I would like
have a partner that is educated, because for every in-laws, son-in-law just
handsome will not be enough, he should be educated to look for jobs and smart
to build a family.
Third, I prefer a
partner who is humorist, because funny does not make us bored, which can make
our mood is always good, always give positive energy for us. Because my hope is
to have a partner who can always make me laugh and be happy.
Hopefully we will soon be met with our soul mate😍 haha..
Don’t forget give me correction for the mistakes,
give critic and advice in the comment column.
thank you😊..
You did it well Laily, hopefully you will meet someone based on your criteria 😎
ReplyDeleteUwuuu a little bit same w/ mee😉 but btw the humorist one u can changed it w/ humorous... good job babyyy🌈
ReplyDeleteit's all good il :D , but i think use 'who is' more sound good than use 'that is' on your second criteria...
ReplyDeleteGreat iil. But in the first paragraph maybe you should change “everyone must have a dream” become “everyone must has a dream”
ReplyDeleteThats good criteria, but you must be carefull and particular about your grammar i find
ReplyDelete"we will soon be met with our soul mate" in this sentence use simple future tense whic that (S+will+V1+S) or (S+To Be(is, am, are) +Going To+V1+O), so your sentence became "we will meet with...." Correct me if i wrong :). Overall thats good articel and i love it. GOOD JOB and KEEP SPIRIT Iil!!!!
Good iil I think u must describe the physically maybe, but overall is good!!
ReplyDeleteAw aw aw awsome... Great job Il, but be careful with the grammar okay? Hope you can find someone just like what you want.
ReplyDeleteGood article Iil 💕
ReplyDeleteGood article lil, i hope you can found your partner like your want
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