Hello everyone😉...
Now Iwant to share you about new topic, it’s about signal
words which is my own biography..
Oke guys.. enjoy reading yeah
Outline :
SIGNAL WORDS
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IMPORTANT EVENTS
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In 1999
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•She was born in Lamongan
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After a few years, in the middle
of 2003
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•She start studied at Muslimat
NU 08 Kindergarten of Brondong
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In 2005 until 2012
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•She went to Sedayulawas III Elementary School of Brondong
•she won a badminton competition
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9 years later
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•She was a student at Ma’arif 06 Junior High School of Brondong
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In 2015 until she graduated
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•She moved to Lamongan city and continued to 1 Senior High School of
Lamongan
•She joined in scout organization
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From the middle of 2018 until now
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•She moved to Cikarang and continued studies at President University
majoring Environmental Engineering
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Paragraph :
Laily
Thoatil Hanan, or usually called by people iil. She was born in Lamongan,
November 19th 1999. Lamongan is one city of Indonesia, it’s in East Java.
After
a few years, inthe middleof 2003 she start studied in Muslimat NU 08 Kindergarten of Brondong. And in 2005 until
2012 she continued to Sedayulawas III Elementary School of Brondong. And at
about 2011 she won a badminton competition 2 times in a row. 9 years ago she
was a student at Ma’arif 06 Junior High School of Brondong. Next, in 2015 until
2018 She moved to Lamongan city and continued to 1 Senior High School of
Lamongan. At Lamongan she live in boarding house, when I class X, XI, and XII
she joined in scout organization. So, she’s so busy in Senior High School, but
she also got much experienced, acievement, and friends of course.
From
the middle of until now, She moved to Cikarang and continued studies at
President University majoring Environmental Engineering. At Cikarang she live
in dormitory which is President University student Housing. She is so happy,
because got lot of new friends at there.
That’s all from me..
Don’t forget give me correction for the mistakes, give
critic and advice in the comment column.
Thank you😘😘..

There are some mistakes iil, in the second paragraph, kindergarten. I think it should be kindergarden
ReplyDeleteBut, overall, it's good. Keep writing Iil
uwaa i just knew that you ever won badminton competitions... i found little mistakes like there are typos that need space like "inthe" and also "middleof"..
ReplyDeleteWaah good article iil! But, you have some typo in there. You must write "achievment" not "acievment". keep writing!
ReplyDeleteI think there are some typo maybe u can fixed it later.. keeping up!
ReplyDeleteCongrats you already did an awesome job! But there's might be some wrong written like "President University Student Housing" the first letter each words should be an capital word perhaps..keep practising Iil!!
ReplyDeleteWahh good job iil😄👍
ReplyDeleteNice article il...keep writting😆
ReplyDeleteWaw that's interested journey Iil...keep writing and spirit💃
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